Tuesday, August 28, 2012

Chapter 3 - Colorful Love











Hey guys, sorry for not posting for a long time, I was really busy with something's.
I hope you enjoy, I would really love to know your comments and feedbacks on this chapter.


Oh btw I wanna give some advice to you girls reading this chapter:



Girls don't cry about the past, you have to move on, you have the ability to forget. You have to learn from your mistakes, flip the page, and move on, forget what happened in the past, don't go back. A girl is a diamond, don't give yourself to someone who will smash this diamond into pieces, don't ruin yourself by your own hands. Don't lose your parents trust on someone who doesn't deserve you, seriously don't love someone before you get married because it's not worth it, you're just ruining yourself and your reputation. Plus your mascara is too expensive to cry over someone who doesn't deserve it, if that person deserved it he wouldn't let your tears fall down your face.
Oh and girls, never think you're not beautiful, pull your head high up and walk with confidence, YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL, and no one has the right to tell you that you're not. Every person has something special in them, something unique, so don't allow anyone to tell you that you're not pretty, cause you are. And remember "A pretty girl is nothing if she has an ugly heart!!"
If you need any advice girls, i'm here for you


Enjoy the chapter...
















Suddenly the door of the room opened and so did the lights. I heard footsteps of someone walking into my room. The footsteps were getting closer to me. Suddenly this person climbed on my bed and came over me, I felt the person small soft fingers on my arm.



...........: "Manooola, Manaaaaal, Manooool!!" It was a child's girly voice.



I covered my face with the blanket, ignoring whoever it was.
She then got up and started to jump over me.


...........: "Yallah Manal, it's meeeee!!" She kept moaning.


............: "Manaaaal goomay!"
Manal: "Aghhhhh, il wa7d may naam ib hal bait?"
............: "Manooooon it's me!!"
Manal: "Remas?!" My eyes were still closed, I knew it was Remas cause she was the only one that called me 'Manooon' and it was her childish voice.
.............: "Eeehhh!!" She said in her cheerful voice.



I quickly sat up to face Remas.
She was jumping over me, she was wearing red shorts with a white shirt that had red flowers on it and white sandals. She had her hair pulled up into two pony tails. Remas was really cute, 'mal akilha', she looked like me, she was a copy of me, she had the same attitude I had. But she was evil, you know the kids that were so cute from outside, but really evil from inside?! She was one!!:D


Remas is my younger cousin, she is 3 years old and she was really close to me. I loved her and I treated her as a sister and a best friend. I always took her shopping with me and whenever I had the chance I would take her with me. She is like the young sister I never had.


I quickly grabbed her and laid her down as I tickled her. I kept tickling her, she was very ticklish.



Remas: "MANAL BS, Hhhhhhhh, MANAAAAAL!!!" She yelled the words out from between her childish laughs.
Manal: "Goolay A7bich Manal," I continued to tickle her.


She began to kick her legs and she tried moving me away, she tried to push me.


Remas: "Mabii," She yelled out with her childish voice.
Manal: "Mashii," I tickled her everywhere.
Remas: "Laaaaaaaaaaaa 5ala9, Hhhhhhhhh, 5ala9, Hhhhhhhhhhhh, A7bich, Hhhhhhhhhhh, Manooon, Hhhhhhhhhhh, bs, Hhhhhhhh,"
Manal: "Hahaha, okay okay," I stopped tickling her.


She sat properly and drew a huge grin on her face.


Manal: "Shlon yatay? Mno yabich?!"
Remas: "Ebroo7ii, yat mashii!" She gestured in her childish voice.
Manal: "Lat chathbeen Remas, yallah goolay shlon yataaay ya 7ilwaaa?!"
Remas: "Ana mo Remas!!" She snapped at me with her childish voice as she wrapped her arms around her chest.
Manal: "Ha 3ayal? Entay mino?!" I smiled.
Remas: "Ana ebnaytii el 7abooba!"
Manal: "Inzain ya ebnaytii il 7aboba mno yabich?!" I tried holding myself from laughing at her attitude, I played along.
Remas: "Giltlich ana yeet mashie," She snapped at me with her childish voice.


Suddenly someone spoke, it wasn't me or Remas, it was a man's voice.


.........: "Ya chathaba ya Remas, ana yibtich,"



I looked up to find Jassim standing near the door.



Jassim was Remas's bigger brother, Jassim was the love I couldn't live without, he was something big to me. Jassim and I loved each other for over a year now, but we never talked on the phone nor did we talk by BBM or Whatsapp. We never did anything like that because I wasn't like one of these girls, I didn't allow it to happen and he agreed with that, he said it was the right thing to do and I didn't want to lose my parents trust. No one knew about Jassim and I, it was a secret. Jassim promised to marry me when he finished University, he was in Gust. Yes, I loved him, but I always kept it in me, I never said the words 'I love you' to him, but he knew that I loved him.

Jassim had black thick hair, black sparkling eyes, a dimple on his cheek, and tanned skin. He was cute and really kind, he was everything I dreamt of. When we fought he wouldn't just leave me to get happy again alone, like other guys do, he would follow me until he made me laugh.

My face flushed with shyness and my heart skipped a beat at the sight of him, I quickly fixed my hair. I then turned to face Remas and went closer to her ears and whispered.


Manal: "Remas awadich il baqala w ashtrilich 7alaw, bs 6al3ay Jassim bara, deal?!" I whispered.

Remas then moved away and thought for a few seconds. She then came closer and whispered back.

Remas: "Goolay wallah?!" She whispered the words in her childish voice. I felt her breath tickle against my ears.
Manal: "Wallah!!" I whispered back.



Jassim: "Hoooob hoooob, shno 9ayr mini, tara ana mawjood, shga3 etgoleen laha Manool?!"


Whenever I heard my name from his voice my heart would beat faster, my name was special coming out of his mouth, it was different. I felt safe.


Remas: "Iskt degeega Jassim ufffff!" She shushed him.


Remas then came closer to me and whispered back.


Remas: "Deal," She smiled.



Remas then jumped off my king size bed and walked towards Jassim, she reached till his knees.
Remas then kneeled on Jassim and tried pushing him out, she put her small hands on his leg and pushed with all her strength.



Jassim: "Entay shga3 etsaween?! Heeyyyyy Remas!!"
Remas: "I6la3 bara!!" She snapped at him as she continued to push him.
Jassim: "Entay shakoo?!!"
Remas: "Get out Jassim, now, tara wallah ma a36eek 7alawii mara thanya, w ma r7 asma3 kalamik wallah,"
Jassim: "Ily ygool mayt 3ala 7alawich ana, ba3dain ta3alay shno galatlich Manal, ha?!"
Remas: "If I tell you, you will give me double what she gives me?!" She said in her evil childish voice.


Manal: "REMAAASSSSS!!" I yelled out.


Jassim: "Hahaha, Eeehh wa3d entay bs goolilii," Jassim kneeled down to Remas and held her hand to get her attention.
Remas: "Akeed?!" She widened her eyes.



Manal: "No Remas, he is lying,"
Jassim: "Akeed, bs yallah entay goolay," He chuckled.



Remas went closer to Jassim's ears and whispered, I didn't know what she said, but I knew she was going to tell him everything I said.
M9la7chiya hal bint wallah, she is so evil, even though she is so cute.



Manal: "REMASSS!!" I yelled.



Remas moved away from Jassim, Jassim looked at me and gave me a look that made me die from inside. He drew a smile on his face, my face went red, this is embarrassing. Jassim then pushed his lips back to Remas's ears and whispered, I didn't know what he was saying.



Manal: "Remasss ya 5aynaaaaa!!" I covered my face with the blanket, digging my head deeper. I looked to find that I was still in my peach dress from yesterday night, I slept with my makeup on and my heels too, I was really tired yesterday.



Suddenly it was so quiet, I couldn't hear any whispers. I moved the blanket off my head slowly trying to peak. Jassim was standing in front of me and he was staring at me, there was no sign of Remas. I felt my face get hotter as they reddened from the sight of his eyes. He just stood and smiled at me with his adorable eyes.



Manal: "What?" I said innocently with a low nervous shy voice.
Jassim: "Awadich il baqala w ashtrilich 7alaw, bs 6al3ay Jassim bara, haaa??!" He gave me a cute look as he smiled.
Manal: "Ha? La! Remas chathaba!" I said innocently as my face flushed with shyness.
Jassim: "Hahaha, chathaba ha? Goolay enich mista7ya mini w 5ala9,"
Manal: "W sh7aga asti7i?"
Jassim: "Laaaa??!! Eeehh 9adagtich, rag3ay rag3ay, yallah ashoof goomay badlay ana w Badoor r7 enwadeech il mazra3a 3ind Spit,"
Manal: "Mno Spit?!"
Jassim: "Your horse!!"
Manal: "Heyyyyy, his name is Spirit, not Spit, shno Spit!!" I got angry, I loved my horse and I didn't allow anyone to make fun of him.
Jassim: "Hahaha, okay okay, lat 3a6ib el 7elwa, 5ala9 asfeen, wala tiz3leen, Spirit, zain?!"
Manal: "Eeehh!!" I said.


Jassim came closer to my bed, he kept staring at my eyes.


Manal: "Wain Remas?!"
Jassim: "Ra7at!" He smiled. Why does he keep smiling? His smile kills me.
Manal: "Wain? Ana a3arif Remas malgoofa, what did you tell her?!"
Jassim: "I have my ways,"
Manal: "What did you tell her?!"
Jassim: "It's a secret!" He laughed.
Manal: "Laa? Aha okay mashii!! I have my ways too, and I will find out,"
Jassim: "We'll see about that," He laughed.
Manal: "Yallah Jassim get out let me get dressed,"
Jassim: "Entay shno labsaa?!" He noticed that I wasn't in my PJs.
Manal: "U-umm the dress min ams," I stated.
Jassim: "Laish ma badaltay?!"
Manal: "Nmt min kithr il ta3ab,"
Jassim: "Inzain goomay bashoof the dress, ams ma shiftich!!"
Manal: "Mabii, fashlaa!!"
Jassim: "Shno fashlaa?? Goomay, yallah 3ad Manoola, 3ashanii!!" He gave me this cute look with his adorable eyes.


I moved the blanket and stood up from the bed. I was still wearing my heels and my long cinnamon hair was left down wavy. I smiled shyly as Jassim stood there and smiled, staring at me silently.


Manal: "Yallah Jassim, i6la3 bara, babadil!"


Jassim started to come closer...



No don't do this to me Jassim, I can't stand you. Aghhhhh move Jassim, move. Is it hot in here or what? Why isn't the air conditioner on.



Jassim: "You look really pretty, you always do," He whispered the words.


My face went red and my heart was beating faster.


Manal: "Thank you," I said shyly with a smile.




Suddenly I heard Bader yelled out my name as he got closer to my room, Jassim quickly took a few steps away from me.




Bader: "Wanich??"
Manal: "Kanii,"


Bader popped his head into my room.


Bader: "Tawich labsa malabis ams?!"
Manal: "Ams kint ta3bana w nmt 3ala 6ool,"
Bader: "9ij thoola, il mohim, yallah libsay binroo7 il mazra3a, w Jassooom ta3al ma3ay baroo7 ashtiri kora yideeda 3ashan nil3ab, and you better be dressed when we come back," He looked at me, knowing that I took a long time to dress up.
Manal: "Okay okay, now stop ordering me around, i'm not a baby,"
Bader: "Yes you are!"


I held my pillow and was about to throw it at him but he ran away.






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I called the girls to see if any of them could come...
They all got excuses, Lamaar was scared of Spirit, Noor was busy with her cousins, Leena had to go to her Grandma's house and Juju was going shopping with her mother.


I took a shower then got dressed into this:






 
 
 
 










I made my hair into a pony tail and pulled the pony tail from the hole that was behind the hat. I looked cute and simple, I stared at myself as I applied some lipstick.



Suddenly Bader called me from downstairs.


Bader: "MANAL YALLAH NIZLAAAY, BENROO7!!!!" He yelled out from downstairs.
Manal: "COMINGGGG!!" I yelled.



I quickly grabbed my phone and my hand bag and ran downstairs.


Bader was brushing his hair, Jassim was fiddling with his Canon Professional Camera, and Remas was sitting on the stairs waiting for me.



Manal: "Yallah?" I asked.
Bader: "Yallah!" He put the brush on the table and grabbed his keys.
Manal: "Badoor abii a6lib minik shay, bs lat ridnii, tikfaa!!"
Bader: "Amraay Manool,"
Manal: "Basoog!! Please please please please, pretty please, pweaseeeeeeeeee!!" I begged him.
Bader: "No!!"
Manal: "Yallah 3ad, I wanna drive your car, you never let me drive your car,"
Bader: "I know that, but it's my car, and I don't want you driving it,"
Manal: "Badoor pweeeaaassseeeee 3ashaniii, pwease, pwease, pwease, I said pwease, if you love me Badoor, Allah y5aleek!!" (Pwease ya3ni please) I continued to beg him. I gave him my puppy eyes as I put my hand on his arm.
Bader: "Fine, but no speeding,"
Manal: "YESSSS, WALLAH A7BIK ANA, AMOOT FEEK!!! YOU'RE THE BEST BROTHER EVEEEERRRRRR!!!"
Bader: "7adich m9la7chiya!!"
Manal: "I know," I smiled while grabbing the keys out of his hand and running out to the car.


I sat in the driver's seat and Bader sat next to me. Jassim and Remas sat at the back.


Bader had a sport car, I loved his car, but he never let me drive it. It was the first time to drive it today and I was really excited.

Bader's car:










Jassim: "Ash'hadoo ena la elaha ila Allah!!!" He teased me.
Manal: "Heyyy, lat 7a6mooniii," I frowned.
Remas: "Bs Jassim, Manoon doosay okay?!!" She said it in a childish voice.
Manal: "Remas ana mabii akalmich!!"
Remas: "Laish?!" She said innocently in her childish voice.
Manal: "You know why," I gave her a death stare from the mirror that was above me.
Remas: "Tara Jassim chathab, ma gilta,"
Jassim: "Ana chathab ya chathaba?"
Remas: "Eeehh, ana mathlooma!" She pouted.
Jassim: "Entay mathlooma? Entay el thalmaa a9lan,"
Manal: "Hahaha, 7aram 3alik Jassim, 5ala9 Remas wala tiz3leen, 7abebtyy entay,"
Bader: "Ana madre shilsalfa bs bath7ak ma3akom 3aba6, Hahahaha, yallah 5al9ina soogay, bs itha mit r7 athbi7ich,"
Manal: "Wait, wait, bafham, shlon itha mit r7 tithba7ni, ya3ni mo mayet?" I mocked him.
Bader: "Shut up and drive miss 'Smarty pants'!!"
Manal: "Hahaha, okay okay yallah, bismilah!!" I started the car.







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I drove and speeded up, I was having the time of my life. Bader kept telling me to slow down but I skipped him. I played the radio and started to sing along, they all laughed at how crazy I went and whenever Bader told me I was crazy I would go like 'YOLO dude'. I was really having fun, it was the best day ever, I really enjoyed it.

At last we got there, I parked the car and got out.


Manal: "Remas ta3alay ma3ay, baroo7 3ind Spirit,"
Remas: "Okay," She smiled and followed me.


I was about to walk away when Bader called out.


Bader: "Manal!!!"
Manal: "Hala?!"
Bader: "Aren't you forgetting something?!"
Manal: "What?!" I knew what he meant, it was his keys, but I played stupid.
Bader: "My keys!!" He snapped.
Manal: "Mo 3indii," I lied, as I began to blink faster.
Bader: "Waina?!"
Manal: "3ind Jassim," I continued to lie.
Jassim: "Ya na9abaaa, mo 3indii,"


Bader gave me a death stare..


Bader: "Jassim ebser3a, HOLD HER!!!!" He yelled.


Bader was on the other side of the car, so Jassim was closer to me and that's why he told Jassim to hold me.


I was about to run when Jassim held me.

Manal: "WA5R JASSIM, WA5R, JASSIM!!!" I tried to push Jassim but I couldn't.


Manal: "JASSIM IT'S NOT FAIR, WA5RRRR JASOOM, PLEASE PLEASE!!"


He just laughed.


Manal: "Remas come tickle Jassim, EBSER3AAA, PLEASE REMAASSSSS!!" I tried to move but Jassim was stronger than me.


Remas was about to come when Jassim threatened her.

Jassim: "Remas ta3alay 3ashan ilwa3d ily wa3atich yah eb daar Manal ma asawii,"
Remas: "La 5ala9 5ala9," She moved away.
Manal: "AYYY WA3D??! REMAAASSSSS, LAAAAA TA3AALAAAYY!!" I tried to move.
Jassim: "Hahaha!!" He laughed evilly.



Jassim just laughed at me as Bader came and tickled me and took his keys from my pocket. Bader never hit me, and I knew he would never think of hitting me, he wasn't like other guys. He used his brain not his hands.


Bader: "3ashan tit3alimaan,"

Bader and Jassim laughed at me.

Manal: "Mashii Jassim, mashii,"
Jassim: "Yomaaa, tara a5af min i5tik Badoor,"
Manal: "En6r 3alay, Mashii Jassim,"


I walked towards the shed where my horse was, and Remas was walking near me.


Manal: "Remas shno galich Jassim lama kina bil daar?"
Remas: "Goolay wallah ma r7 etgoolen ena giltlich!!"
Manal: "Inshallah!! Yallah goolay,"
Remas: "Galii itha 6ala3t min il daar, ywadeeni il al3aab!!" She smiled.
Manal: "Ahaa okay okay, yallah emshay asra3,"



I entered to find Spirit, I smiled at his sight.
Spirit was breath taking, he was a white horse. I stroke his face gently and then rubbed my face against his and kissed him. I always believed that Spirit understood me, like he could understand whatever I told him, I would always come here and complain to Spirit, he knew everything. And I knew it was impossible that he would tell anyone, hahaha, he couldn't even talk to even think of telling anyone. My secrets were safe with him.


Manal: "I missed you," I whispered the words to Spirit as I smiled.



Remas stood there and rubbed Spirit.
I had to get my helmet and boots on to ride Spirit. I then decided to go get my boots and helmet so I could ride him but I was startled by..........





















 

2 comments:

  1. Next post pweaaasseeeeeee!!! =)) got addicted already

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    1. Hahaha, i wam typing now!!:D
      I am glad you like the new story ;**
      You're too sweet

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