Saturday, May 18, 2013

Chapter 29 - Colorful Love









Heyyy!
How was your day my lovely readers? Well mine was amazing:D
See how I love you all? See seeee???? I post even when I have exams:c No bloggers do that:'( Bs I love you guys so muccchhhhh so I have to spoil you:o


Okaayyyy now back to business *LOL shako:p madre I just wanted to say it;$*
Anyways hahaha, I counted up the votes, it took so much time cuz there is like 200 or something votes and some I got from whatsapp and DM cause some readers told me that they don't know how to comment...
And here are the scores:

For number 1, which was to write a whole new story, it got 27 votes..

For number 2, which was to continue SHAGER, it got 68 votes..

For number 3, which was to continue SHARII, it got 233 votes..

For number 4, which was to link SHAGER with MAS3AD *Manal+Sa3ad*, it got 10 votes...



SO NUMBER 3 WON, YAAAYYYYYY!!!!
NEXT STORY? Will be season 2 of SHARII<3
If you didn't get the chance to read sharii? Here is the link my lovlies...

http://undeniable-diary.blogspot.com/2012/07/chapter-1-passionately-in-love.html?m=1






Ummm what else?
Yeaaahhh before I forget, this chapter is dedicated to two gorgeous pies,


1- To the amazing, lovely, sweet, cute, chocolateness, Channel, Dior, honey, nutella, fruit pie, aeroish, caramel frappuccino @NoorNAseeri , I love you. I love you. I love you. I love youuuu!!!!


2- To? YOU!!! Yes my beautiful reader, this chapter is dedicated to you, for supporting me and for enjoying this and for EVERYTHINGGG!!
I swear I can't live a day without blogging:( It's like so addicting, it's like drugs okayyy? My aero, my baby, my everything!!<3.<3


IMPORTANT!!!!!!!!!!!
In the story Sa3ad and Manal have been together for over 3 weeks now, just saying...


Yallah asket 3ashan you enjoy the post?
Ymaaa zain zain:( 5ala9 basket


OHHHHH I ALMOST FORGET!!!

Ouchh ouchhh ymaa kilatoonii 5ala9 zain basket-.- enjoy;p

Tara bs kint bagool I love you-.-
Lat zifoon:( I LOVE YOUUU GUYSSS!!
#TEAMMAS3AD ALL THE WAYYY!!<3














What the fudge...?





Manal closed her eyes and opened them again not believeing what she saw in front of her. She felt her stomach stirring steadily, hardening her chest as well as her arms while clutching on the jets handle. She pulled her lips inwards but her eyes still laid towards them.
At a distance she saw Leena sitting next to Sa3ad on the sand, he was facing one way and she was aiming to hold his hand, she was touching his wrist and shoulder, almost throwing herself on him. Her long black slacked curls touching his chest and her black eyes trying to make contact with him. She looked desperate to catch his attention, it was like she would do anything just so he would give her some attention and talk to her.
Manal's heart was threatening to jump out of her chest, she froze in her place and stared at them, her bottom lip quivering.


She tried looking around for the girls but there was no sign of Jawa, nor Noor or Lamaar. She looked around for her phone but then remembered that she left it on the bed after talking to Sa3ad. She clenched her teeth and fist so hard, her nails digging into her palms. Fury raced through her body, heating her to her very core and igniting a flame so hot within her heart.


She turned the jet, trying to move again, but it didn't work, it was out of fuel. She cursed herself for not listening to Sa3ad and staying back in the shaleh. She looked around in fear then started to yell, it was useless, it was like she talked to herself. No one could hear her, she was so far away.

She lifted her legs up and pulled them to her chest as she laid her head down and hugged herself.


Manal: "Ugggghhhhhh shoot me!!!" She growled.



"E777mm.." A mascular voice from behind her made her heart race, her heart was about to explode out of her rib cage, she quickly turned around to find a familiar face on a jet.

.....: "Mona? 97?"
Manal: "Laa:/"
......: "A555 nsait esmich, thakreeni,"
Manal: "A3arfik?" She looked pissed.
......: "Shfeech ma tithakarteeni? Ana 6alaal,"
Manal: "6alaal?" She asked in confusion.
6alaal: "Hmm ya3ne feech zahaymar aw ga3 tista3bi6ain?"
Manal: "Aaahhhh 6alaal el thareef ily kaan yt7arash bel jam3iya?" A sarcastic smile playing on her lips.
6alaal: "Aaahhh," He snickered, "Thareef? Okayyy, bs w rabee mo ga3 at7arash, neeti 9afya ya a5yy," He stated mockingly. "Zain shda3wa thakreeni, shsmich?!"
Manal: "Jahanaamm, ent shako?"
6alaal: "Asfeen bo jassom," His voice became more manly, "Shfeech shfeech? 5ala9 amshee ya3ni?"
Manal: "Ya3ne ya rait,"
6alaal: "Okay 3ayal dawreelich a7ad ysa3dich, mako banzeen 97?" He chuckled as he turned to make his way back.
Manal: "Hey la wait," She jolted out.
6alaal: "Asfa o5ooy ma akalem shabaab, wayy wayyy lat kalemnii, shako tet7arash?" He tried sounding like a girl.
Manal: "Uffffff," She rolled her eyes.
6alaal: "Ambaayy ambaayyy tara bagool 7ag o5ooy 3ashan ytigeegk," He imitated a girly tone as he laughed.

Manal wrapped her arms around her chest as she gave him a death stare.

Manal: "Are you done yet?"
6alaal: "Nope," He burst out laughing.
Manal :"La jad seriously? Are you ganna help me or not?"
6alaal: "Aaahhh el i5t titshara6 ba3ad,"
Manal: "Ista'3far allah, you know you can kind of be a bit helpful here instead of being such an idiot,"
6alaal: "A7777 el7een ana idiot?"
Manal: "Eeehh idiot w ni9 ba3ad,"
6alaal: "Okay okay, mara7 asa3dich yallah bye," He was about to move his jet.
Manal: "Heyyy la wait,"
6alaal: "Inzain shoofay asa3dich bs 3ala shar6!" He smiled.
Manal: "W shno hal shar6?!"
6alaal: "Umm ta36eeni ra8mich," He tilted his head giving her a genuine smile.
Manal: "Ahhh nithamik?!"
6alaal: "Fee mara a7ad galich ena rasich yabes w 3aneeda?"
Manal: "Fee mara a7ad galik enik maleeq w qatheeth?"
6alaal: "La mako,"
Manal: "Eeehh zain darait enhom yjamloonik, truth hurts baby,"
6alaal: "Rayaal esh6ooli ish3erthi etgooleli baby?!"
Manal: "Tadre shlon? Mo kafo a7ad ykalamik, ana basba7 layy shaleyhna, yallah farij,"
6alaal: "A7777 qaweyaaaaaaaa, aaahhhh ya3ne ana el shoja3a ely asba7,"
Manal: "Thareef wai3,"
6alaal: "Wayyy ambayyy la tit7arish,"
Manal: "Ugghhhh."
6alaal: "Hahaha zain 5ala9 basa3dich, rikbayy!"
Manal: "5air? Arkab?"
6alaal: "Ha 3ayal shlon?!"
Manal: "5alik meni w 3a6ne your jet, aroo7 ayeeb banzeen w aredlik,"
6alaal: "3abalich eni wayed metbaree men roo7i?!"
Manal: "Laish?!"
6alaal: "3ashan etroo7en w mat rideen ha?"
Manal: "Wayed 5ayef 3ala roo7ik?!"
6alaal: "Eeehhh roo7i '3alya 7abebtyy," He laughed.
Manal: "Hufff zain el7een shlon shlon ya3ni?!"
6alaal: "Madre entayy goleeli shlon shlon ya3ni," He imitated Manal.
Manal: "Ughhhh." She gave him a death stare, "Wait 3ade asta3mel teliphonik?!" Her eyes sparkled.
6alaal: "Mako ra9eed," He lied.
Manal: "Ma minik fayda zain,"
6alaal: "3adaaalllll,"
Manal: "Tara 3ade abche el7een okay?!" She pulled her legs up and hugged them to her chest, "7aar w abe ared w ta3abt,"

6alaal gazed at her, Manal was indeed beautiful, her rubby cheeks, her long wavy cinnamon hair, her luminous skin, her pinkish plump lips, her straight narrow nose, her arched eyebrows, flawless!!!!!


6alaal: "Ela ta3alay ma gilteeli shismich?!" He bared his teeth at her.
Manal: "Hufff,"
6alaal: "Shda3wa bakel esmich mathalan?!"
Manal: "Abee ared," Her eye sockets were getting filled with tears.
6alaal: "Hey la ma etifaqna tabcheen, ya bint el nas aredich el bait bs la tabcheen,"
Manal: "Tara babchee jad bs bared, abee o5ooy,"
6alaal: "La laaa la tabcheen hach hach ako ra9eed kent ga3 at'3ashmar,"
Manal: "Ambayyyy mo min 9ijikk!!" She pulled his phone and dialed some numbers, it kept ringing but no one answered. "Ma7ad ga3 yrid,"
6alaal: "Eehh mo 3ashan ma7ad yabeech, yaboon yftakoon menich," He tittered.
Manal: "Tara mat tha7ik kilishhhh!!!"
6alaal: "Zain 5ala9 rekbay waray wallah wa3d ma r7 asawe shay w mskeeni min foug,"
Manal: "Mabe arkaab,"
6alaal: "Tara wallah ma7ad beshoofich kelha digeegtain w to9leen,"
Manal: "Huffff zain zain,"


She jumped off her jet getting her clothes wet as tried getting on his jet, he stretched his warm masculine hands out to help her hop on. She placed her hands on his shoulder and tried not to stay close to him.


6alaal: "Shda3wa yoba wallah mani maklich," He smiled.
Manal: "Ridnee please please,"
6alaal: "Zain zain bs la tabcheen ma 3araftich 5awafa,"
Manal: "RIDNEE!!"
6alaal: "Ya rabee wallahh okayyy," He took her back to shaleh.


As they got closer she spotted Sa3ad sitting alone, as soon as Sa3ad laid his eyes on Manal he jolted up and his pupils widened.



Manal: "Mashkoor," Manal jumped off.


Sa3ad: "Manaaalll?!" He called at a distance as he came closer.
Manal: "Na3am?!" She turned to face him.
Sa3ad: "Ent mno?!" He looked at him, "Shlon rakba wiyaa?!" His voice got louder.
Manal: "Lat 9ari5 mo a9'3ar i3yalik ana, el jet mako banzeen w dagait ma7ad ga3 yrid, fa 6alaal shafne bel 9idfa w wa9alnee,"
Sa3ad: "Ba3ad et3arfeen esmaa?!"
Manal: "Ba3ad shno ya3ne wa9alnee," She fired back at him.
6alaal: "E77mmm ana ast2thin,"
Sa3ad: "Mashkoor mat ga9er," He didn't even look at 6alaal, his eyes were fixed on Manal.
6alaal: "El 3afo, yallah 3ayal ma3 el salama," He drove off.



Manal gave Sa3ad a disgusted look and ran into the shaleh as she made her way to her room, Sa3ad followed her.


Sa3ad: "Manal!!" He yelled,

She ignored him and entered her room.

Sa3ad: "Ga3 a7acheech ana," He pulled her arm as his fingers dug through her skin and she winched in pain.
Manal: "Aaayyyy hidnee," She tired pulling her arm away but his grip was strong.
Sa3ad: "Entay hablaa? Sh7aga terkibeen wiyaa?! Chan ni6artayy!!"
Manal: "Mo hatha eli hamik 9a7? Madre 3ad ya3ne mihtaam ent w 7abebat el galb,"
Sa3ad: "Eshga9dich?!" His fingers pushed deeper into her skin but not to deep to hurt her, just deep enough to control her movements.
Manal: "Ent fahim shno ga9dee," She fought back, her eyes flamming up in fire.
Sa3ad: "La mo fahim, fahmeeni," His eyes grew harder.
Manal: "7abeebat galbik ely kanat lazga feek, shway w etdish feek ba3ad,"  She plastered a sarcastic smile on her face.
Sa3ad: "Shako?!"
Manal: "La wallah?!"
Sa3ad: "Ga9rayy 7isich la7ad ysmi3ichhh!"
Manal: "Laish? 5ayif tijra7 masha3r 7abeebat el galb?" She was totally under the spell of jealousy.
Sa3ad: "Ana shasawee ya3nee? Ehya elzigat feeni!! Ba3dain lo kintay mo lahya ma3 7abeeb el galb chan shiftayy shno sawait feeha,"
Manal: "W lo ent ma kint lahii ma3 7abeebat el galb w tamait 3ala wa3dik enik etraqibnii chan ma 9aar ely 9aar," Her eyes spoke of raw emotions.


Sa3ad felt numb, he stared into Manal's eyes, her eye sockets were filling up with tears, threatening to fall over. They spoke of raw emotions, emotions of pain, jealousy and loneliness but her tongue spoke of strength and anger. It struck him strongly and his heart ached for her. His anger was washed away as he got closer to her.

Manal: "Wa5r," She said croaky in a low tone as she pushed her fingers on his chest. He ignored her and came closer taking her breath away as he left just inches between them. She grew feeble against the hardness of his chest.

Sa3ad slowly pressed his warm thumb against Manal's cheeks as he gently wiped her tears.

Manal: "Shtabee? Bs wa5r!" She muttered in a low tone as she hardened her small fingers on his chest.
Sa3ad: "Ya3ne el7een et'3areen?!" He gave her a half sexy smile.
Manal: "Sh7aga a'3ar? Min Leena? La 7alaal 3alaik,"
Sa3ad: "9ij? 7alaal 3alay?! Yallah baroo7 ata6aman 3alaiha w aridlich," He was about to turn around before she pulled his arm. "Shfeech?!" He tried hiding his smile.
Manal: "Eeehhh ma 9adagt 3ala allah agoolik roo7 ha?! 5ala9 yallahh roo7 roo7, aw agoolik ana aroo7 anadeelik yaha," She smiled sarcastically as she made her way to the door.
Sa3ad: "Manal!!" He pulled her arm stopping her from exiting the room. "Laish ga3 net'hawash?!"
Manal: "Madre 3anik ent kela bs tabe tet'hawash, arba3 w 3ishreen sa3a i9ra5 w zaff, ana eshsawait? Sa3ad wallah ta3abt wallah bs 5ala9 ir7am eb 7ali!!!"
Sa3ad: "Ma-anal," He croaked.
Manal: "Sa3ad I think we should take a break from each other," She stuttered.
Sa3ad: "SHNO?!" He yelled in shock.


Her words stung him painfully, he felt like someone ripped his heart apart, like he was about to lose everything.















My Own Area...






Do you know a life of loneliness and one filled with pain
living a life with nothing to gain. Surrounded by darkness
Overwhelmed with shame. A life without peace with no one to blame.
 

Do you know of a place unseen, a place that holds only shattered dreams, A place filled with sorrow with no end in sight, I am given this gift each and every night.
 

Do you know of a place so cold, this is the place I call my soul. A place without hope or comforting dreams, a life not worth living wouldn't it seem
 

Do you know of a life, that should have never been, and the feeling that today, this life has to end. One more day of sadness is much too hard to bare, I am tired of living a life of heart ache and despair.
 

Do you know a person with so much pain inside, or the feeling of loneliness when no one hears your cries, maybe when the tears are gone, and I can clearly see, the only question left will be..
DO YOU KNOW ME?!








I hope you enjoyed!!
I'm so so so sorry for the cliffhanger:c
Don't forget to give me feedback, love you all<3


















 

37 comments:

  1. FIRST! I love you and your blog to death gd luck in your exams :c ILYSM

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  2. Omg! Loved your post!! Really thanks your the best blogger EVER! I LOVE YOU!!!!!! POST SOOOON because it was a cliffhanger!!! i really want to know sa3ad's reaction to what manal said. And yeaaah #TEAMMAS3AD <3.<3

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  3. it's cliffhanger* lol :p

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  4. 6alal is so cuteeee <3:( 5aleeeh felstorry <3.<3

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  5. Laa laa mu chthy el cliffhanger:'(!!!!!!
    Amazingg as alwaays♥♥
    Allah ewfgchh samar;*

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  6. dont let her love 6alal a7s bykoun m95raa al9ra7a lnha she kind of loved everyone in the story so keep it real w 5leha t7b sa3ad AND THATS ALL! MANAL AND SA3AAAAAD<3 so 5leha tklm m3 sa3ad w 6alal 5l y7b ay 3ela thanya '3er manal

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  7. #TEAMMAS3AD FOREVER DONT LET THEM BREAK UP THE STORY WILL BE AWFUL AND I'LL STOP READING! THEY SHOULD END UP MARRYING SO MAKE IT A HAPPY ENDING. AND KEEP GOING X

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  8. Ma7eb leena! Tnarfetz heyya oo sa3ad! 6alal = love. You =endless looooovve !! Mashallah 3alaich ! Too bright too amazing too fabulous too hard to discribe! I JUST LOVEYOU SAMOORA <3!! Good luck ,wishing you the best! -R*

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  9. WHY DID SAAD GRAB HER ARM OMG EW
    #TEAMTALAL ALL THE WAY

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  10. Wsaaaay 7araaaam yakser elkha6eerv:(:(

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  11. Krahtttt saad 6alal is more cuter! 7ta 7luuu esmaaa soooooo #teamtalal babyyyy!

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  12. I lovveedddd the chapter!! Butt whyyyy?? Laishh break? They're veryy cute together :'(

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  13. AYYYYSHYYYY! cliffhanger:(? Matefagnaaaa! 6alal is cute in the same time y7eerrr evening saad #teamtalsa3::::::::: fahmtehaa?

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  14. 3ajeeba ur story !! Post soon ;* #TEAMSA3AD

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  15. They are adorable together so let them stay TOGETHER #post as soon as possible

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  16. YALLAH WAITING FOR THE NEXT POST XX

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  17. Waiting waiting waiting

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  18. Yuulaa wonderful post;*

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  19. Can't wait for the next post, I'm inlove with your blog
    Please post today, can't wait to know what will happen next!!!!

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  20. Next post please?!
    -S

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  21. POST POST POST POST POST POST POST POST

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  22. I love your blog so much, it's really amazing! Can't wait for the next post! Love you xx

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  23. P O S T P L E A S E

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  24. Post Post Post POST POST POST POST PPPPPPAAAAAHHHHHLLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEE- and it never ends :p
    -Maryyam

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  25. LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! 7AAADAA 3AJEEEBB XX

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  26. #teammalal Forever break them up saad doesnt desirves her

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  28. AMAZING!! 6ALAL IS SO CUTE INSHALLAH HE ENDS UP WITH MANAL! POST SOON :*

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