Thursday, June 6, 2013

Chapter 36 - Colorful Love












BAAAMMM!!! When Samar promises to post today, she does!! I never break my promises.
Update me!! Shlonkom? Who started summer? How is studying? How is everything? Hope you're doing okay!:D
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Okay this chapter is dedicated to the lovely, amazing, Coco Channel Aseel Naqi<3 My babyyyyy I love youuu to death, she is the best, she is amazing, she is EVERYTHING!!!
Oh and also to @itsdeama

Enshallah i'll be spamming you guys with posts these days:D Yaaayyyyy!!!
Hope you enjoy this chapter,

Guys please please please please, I know I have tons of silent readers, but why be a silent reader? I swear I don't bite:( You know that with just a few words you can make my day, it won't take 2 minutes of your time, I promise:c

OH AND!!!! Ely bigooli hal chapter eg9eer, bajrem feeh okay?:$

Yallah el7een basket jad 3ashan tigroon, enjoy, I love you all<3
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"Sa3ad I have to go now," Manal stuttered but her heart was humming, ready to explode out of her ribcage any second. Sa3ad stood in front of her with a charming smile plastered on his face, his dimples popping up every few seconds. Manal slightly hardened her fingers against his chest, trying to move him away.

"Why do you always do that?" Sa3ad cocked an eye-brow, looking at her intently.

"Do what?" Manal asked, her pupils widening.

"Run away from me!" Sa3ad's seriousness melted away as he whispered his words.

"I'm not," Manal trembled slightly, her breath quickening. Sa3ad felt Manal's hot breath tickle against his skin, he drew a smile as he was about to take another step towards her but she pushed her fingers deeper into his chest, stopping him. "I have to go," Manal's voice was inaudible, she moved away slightly leaving a bigger gap between them, she feared that someone would over hear them or walk in, to check on him. Her heart was beating as fast as the hooves of a horse on a racetrack, she was shaking in fear.

"Why are you scared? Or should I say shy?" Sa3ad smiled to himself, trying to hold back his chuckle.

"Sa3ad," Manal fired her eyes up to him, her pupils enlarging by the second. Sa3ad gently brushed his warm radiant hand on her delicate fluffy cheeks. Suddenly Manal moved away and shot Sa3ad a cute smile as she got closer to the door.

"And you're running away againnnnnn," Sa3ad sniveled, and Manal chuckled.








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"Banaat shraykom ensawe tan?" Manal simpered. The bright sun nearby hot enough to cover them in an invisible blanket of warmth. The cold breeze entangling itself through their hair as they caught sight of the beautiful, big blue waves that were crashing against the rocks. The warm, golden sand running between their toes, the smell of salty air from the crisp air teeming their nostrils as they walked along the beach.

"Eeehh wallah min zimaan abyy asawee," Jawa turned to face Manal.

"A7ad 3enda banana boat?" Lamaar's voice boomed out.

"Ana yebt," Leena drew a toothy smile along her lips.

"Ayaabaaaa, yallahh yalllahhh 5an saweee," Noor grinned widely.

"Wait wait, shloun? Shnalbs?" Manal asked worrying that Sa3ad wouldn't allow her.



"Tabeen a36eech malabs min 3endii?" A deep voice from behind them made the girls jump. They all turned around to find a tall figure standing.

"5air o5ooy?" Noor grimaced at him in disgust.

"Shfeech? Manal?" He called out, the girls turned to Manal in shock.

"Manal mno hatha?!" Lamaar asked as a slight 'o' formed on her lips.

"Afaa? Kel hatha w nasyatnee?! Afaa Manal?" The tall man smirked, Manal couldn't really look at him because the sun was banging straight through her eye, she move slightly to be able to look at the figure that was standing in front of her, It was 6alaal.

"Esta'3far allah, ent shno? Mat mel? Ir7al!" Manal shot him a death stare as she crossed her arms tightly around her chest.

"Manool fahmeena mno hatha!!" Jawa's forehead furrowed in confusion.

"Shfeekom banat? Nooro tathkireen hatha mal el jam3iya? Lamaar, hatha elyy lama kena wagfeen? Hathaa eli bs y5iz??" Manal stared at Noor and Lamaar, awaiting their 'light bulb' moment to take up. Lamaar and Noor's faces lightened up as they remembered.

"Eeehh eehhh tithakarta," Noor glared at him. "5air? 2mer? Na3am? Shtabee?" Noor fired her words at him not giving him a chance to talk.

"Bsmellahh, kelatooni begshoori, yaay asalem, 7araam?!" 6alaal stated, his hair was messily pulled back with some gel to show off his handsome features.

"W 3alakom el salaam!! Yallah ma3 el salama," Manal roared at 6alaal.

"Zain ana thayi3," 6alaal pouted "3ade ta36eeni raqmich? Chood ydaleeni!!" 6alaal smirked to Manal, still trying to get her number.

"Way3aaa," Lamaar grimaced in disgust.

"Kalamtich?!" 6alaal gave her a death, cold stare.

"Emshaw banat, emshaw," Manal ignored 6alaal and turned her back to walk away, and so did the girls.








"Manal mno hatha?!" Leena sounded curious.

"Eehh Manool sh3arefa eb esmich, okay ya3ne shafech, bs shlon 3araf esmich?" Noor's pupils widened as she raised one of her eye-brows in suspiciousness.

"Shoofay ....................." And Manal told the girls everything.



"MINIIII MINIIIII!!" Noor gestured to her throat, "Ma yenbel3," Noor loathed.

"Ashkaal zbalaa," Jawa blurted out in disgust.

"La2 ana ashoofa 7ail cute," Leena jutted out her bottom lip.

"3aib ya bent, esta7 3ala wayhich, a7esa maleeq," Lamaar huffed.

"5ala9 bs, 5an saker el salfa, emshaw, mo geltaw bensawee tan?" Manal stated in annoyance, trying to change the subject.

"Ana 3an nafsee, male 5elg asawe tan," Jawa yawned.

"Ana ba3ad!!" Manal lied. She wanted to tan, but she didn't want have a fight with Sa3ad over such a pathetic issue.

"Ohooo! Et9adgoon? Ana ba3ad, agool emshaw da5el, 7ar 7aarr w banaam layyyn yo9al el '3adaa," Noor shifted her eyes towards the shaleh. The girls made their way back.






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Manal slowly slid her finger across the screen to unlock her phone, she pressed on the whatsapp app and scrolled down quickly to all of the chats, her eyes skimming through them, looking for a particular name. A smile lingered along her lips as she noticed a message from Sa3ad...


" <3 فيني عقل بس أنشهد انك خذيته "


Manal felt her heart beating wildly inside her chest, sending butterflies directly to her stomach.
Manal stared at her phone like a loony, as her blushed face drew a grin along her lips. She began to type...



Manal: "S3aad?"


Manal waited for a few seconds, suddenly Sa3ad came online. Her grin grew wider, she loved how he always answered her quickly.


Sa3ad: "Ma sawateeli pasta mabyy akalmich:'("
Manal: "-.-"
Sa3ad: "At'3ashmar yba, el7een atzagnam ay shay:p"
Manal: "Hahaha, enshallah el mara el yaaaya asaweelik, p.s: there isn't enough ingredients in the shaleh to make an alfredo pasta now.."
Sa3ad: "La2 5ala9 3ade, shakli bagazerha ma3 KFC:p"
Manal: "KFC?=)"
Sa3ad: "Ba3ad shasawee mortyy mo fathyatlii:p"
Manal: "Anyways,"
Sa3ad: "And there goes Manal again.."
Manal: "What?:o"
Sa3ad: "Running away from me=)"
Manal: "La takel min KFC, shway w r7 iyeebon '3adaa!"
Sa3ad: "Enshallah Mama Manal,"
Manal: "3afya 3al sha6r:p"
Sa3ad: "Shftayy shloun asma3 kalamich ana? Mo mithlch, agoolich saweeli akel mat saween:(("
Manal: "Radainaaa?!"
Sa3ad: "La2 5ala9 5alaa9, tel3ibeen truth or dare?"
Manal: "Yallah fouga:D"



And they played the truth or dare game, Manal was sitting on the bed clutching against her phone, about an hour went by...


Manal: "Wait wait ent wainik?"
Sa3ad: "Bara ga3 atmasha:p"
Manal: "Okay;p"
Sa3ad: "Laish? El shaleh thalaam bidooni 97?:'D"
Manal: "Mat 7amal el theqa!!!"
Sa3ad: "Sjjkf,"
Manal: "Huh?"


Sa3ad suddenly went offline, Manal got worried. She sat up straight and stared deeply at the screen, as she waited for Sa3ad to come back online..


Manal: "Sa3ad??!!!!"










Sa3ad's side...



Sa3ad was walking along the sea shore clutching against his phone as a smile lingered on his lips, he was talking to Manal. Suddenly he was startled to feel a warm hand cover over his hand, he rushed to turn around, closing his phone without noticing that he sent a few letters that made no sense. His lips forming a slight 'o' as his eyes laid on the girl that was wearing a tight short colorful, summer dress. The sun was blocking his eyes from identifying the girl that stood in front of him, with her hand gripping onto his, her grip was tightening by the second.

Sa3ad moved slightly to try to look at the girl's face, her lips brutally dabbed with red lipstick, and her face caked up with makeup. He looked at her in shock and surprise, it was Leena.


Sa3ad quickly pulled his hand away, his eye's hardening as he looked down at her in disgust and astonishment.


"Entayy shfeech? Shloun tamsikeen eedi chethy?" Sa3ad boomed out, his eyes firing out with laser glares.

"Shfeek Sa3ad?" Leena pouted. "Ma sawaytlik shay,"

"Lat 3eedenha mara thanya," Sa3ad's voice was getting louder, anger was fueling up inside him.

"Laish et9are5 3alay? 7araam 3alaik Sa3ad! Ent laish kela titjahalnii? Ana shsawaitlik?!" Leena's voice sounding sl*tty-er by the second. She slowly brushed her palm against his shoulder as she stared deeply into his eyes, her bottom lip jutting out as she frowned.

"La ti7isebeeni mo emla7th shay," Sa3ad grabbed her hand off his shoulder and pushed his fingers deep into her skin. "7i6ayy hal shay eb balich 3adel Leena, ana ashoofich w a3terbrich mithel i5tyy w bs!!!" Sa3ad let go of her hand as he shrugged her off. His voice sounding so annoyed and serious.

"Bs ana a7ebk Sa3ad, a7ebkk!!" Leena yelled out, her eye socket's filling up with tears.

Sa3ad's face was slapped with shock, "Entayy mestaw3eba ely ga3 etgoolena?!" Fury raced through his body as he clenched his teeth, "Entayy mithel i5tyy w bs fahmaa, lizmayy 7doodich Leena la awareech shay ma yi3jibich," Sa3ad spat his words out at her like she was a cockroach, brutally stabbing her by his words.

"Bs," Leena's tears cascaded down her face as she placed her hand on his chest.

"Leena wa5rayy 3ani," He plucked Leena's hand away. "Ensayy Leena, ensayyyy, sheelayy hal fikra min balich!" Sa3ad angrily stated, his voice becoming louder and louder.

Leena tried to give it a last shot, using every bit of strength and hope, "Sa3ad wallah a7bekk, a7bekkk Sa3ad," Leena sniveled, as if begging him.


What a cheap girl, a voice hissed in Sa3ad's head.


"Esta7 3ala wayhich, lo eni mo 7ashem ahalich chan wallah 3araft shloun ared 3alaich 3adel, dishay da5el w mabyy ashoof wayhich, w mani 7alef bs w rabee, wallah haa!! En garabtee mini mara thanya? R7 etshoofen shay 3omrich ma r7 titmanaain etshoofena!" Sa3ad rasped. "Fahmaaa???" His voice got louder while saying the last word.


Leena continued to sob as she ran back to the shaleh, making her way to the bathroom.


Mashe ya Sa3ad, mashee, ana a3almik, en ma yebt rasek ma koon Leena Al Flanyy, mashee, hayeennn ya Sa3ad!! The voice inside Leena's head sounding so real.








Sa3ad threw his fingers deep into his messy hair to massage his scalp, as he inhaled a large dose of oxygen trying to calm himself down.
He then pulled his phone out, knowing that the only thing that would make him smile and change his mood was talking to Manal. He opened his phone, finding multiple messages from Manal..


Sa3ad: "Asef asef, kani!"


Manal jumped as she felt her phone vibrate, she rushed to reply back.


Manal: "Sh9ar? Shfeek?"
Sa3ad: "La2 mako shay,"
Manal: "3ayal shno 'sjjkf' w laish ri7t offline faj2a?:/"
Sa3ad: "Shft wa7d min rab3yy w kent ga3 asalem 3alih, ma gidart ared 3alich, asef,"
Manal: "Oh okay,"
Sa3ad: "Yallah enkamel el le3ba?!"
Manal: "U-umm okay:p"
Sa3ad: "Layy koon malaitayy mini w ma tabeen til3ibeen:o?"
Manal: "La2 shako, shako!!"
Sa3ad: "You know that you're amazing?"
Manal: "I know, do you know how I know that?"
Sa3ad: "How?!"
Manal: "Cause I talk to this amazing person, awal 7arf min esma S3aaad:o"
Sa3ad: "Snappp:c I hate how much i'm addicted to you-.-"



And their chat continued till the lunch arrived...









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The shaleh was so quiet, Leena could hear the humming of the refrigerator as she made her way down the stairs. The lights were all off, it seemed a bit scary. Leena couldn't sleep, she kept turning in bed, she was trying to think of something, an idea, a plan, a solution to own Sa3ad's heart, to rip Manal out of his heart, Manal, the girl that took up almost all of his heart. Ideas kept twirling and dancing in her head, but non of them seemed to be the right one. Leena growled as she opened the door of the shaleh and made her way out to walk along the shore.

As she walked along the warm tiny particles of sand, she breathed in the crisp air that the beach delivered. Shimmering expanse of endless white that cushioned the seas timeless arrival, bringing with it seas flotsam to decorate the sands soft bed.

Her brain almost exploding from thinking, it really caused her a huge migraine. She needed something to make them hate each other, something that would make them never last, something that would pull them apart forever. But was that possible? Was it possible to rip Manal out of Sa3ad's heart? To make him fall in love with Leena instead? To steal him away? Was Sa3ad's love going to be strong enough to overcome the problems Leena may cause?




What do you think...















My Own Area...




I'm tired. A word she keep repeating to herself over and over again, but tired of what?
Today she emptied her long neglected drawers, and dusted the books he once handed over to her, each signed with his name, each carrying his sweet words, the words that she, in her bitterness has torn away years ago.

She sat on her bed and slipped through her memories of him, each line brought back something; a touch of his finger, a good morning whisper, she closed her eyes and she almost felt it. She traced her fingers on the smooth pages, hoping to find the faint imprint of his writing.

She realized a few years ago that she was tired, tired of waiting for him. She cried and rebelled, until it broke everything inside her, but she somehow managed to salvage some parts and started waiting - again, for someone, like him who would be able to fix what she couldn't.

She realized now that this person should be her; she shouldn't be waiting - she should be fixing - but until she can find the strength to do so, she will remain to be tired, her words will remain hollow and meaningless, so she will say goodbye until then.






Hope you enjoyed x
Please, please, please give me your comments, if you do? That will make me post sooner:D
Love you all!!<3
















 

27 comments:

  1. One of the best blogs I've ever seen mashalla the way u choose words that describes the situation infront of my eyes , the deeply detailed descriptions I love ♥ keep going girl !! I couldn't resist not to comment !! I'm waiting for the next chapter ;*
    Allah ygweek w ys3dk ;* LK

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  2. This is the first comment I write in any blog.
    Firstly, I wanna say that I LOVE the way you write, the way you tell us the story and what happened, the way that you mention the smallest details, it all makes me feel like I'm watching a movie.. I can imagine the characters and the place and everything.
    Your blog and YOU are the definition of amazing.
    If you say our comments make you day, believe me when I say this; seeing a tweet from you makes my day, for real. You have a great way of writing that makes me feel like you're setting infront of me telling me the story your self.
    I know it kinda disappoints you knowing that you have a lot of readers but yet they don't all comment back. Trust me they don't comment back because they've got nothing to say. Lu atklm mn alyoum le bacher, it won't be enough!!
    I just adore your story. So addecting. Continue the great work. Love you. Hope I made your day like you've made my weekend by posting this chapter.
    With all my love -S.

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  3. A silent reader whos too lazy to comment��sorry i'll try to comment on every post from now and on.
    The post is amazingg cant wait for the next post please we need lots of action on leenas thing so do your magic ;)
    You know that even silent readers actually love you and think that you're flawlessly amazing?

    Gh.

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  4. Loved it so much:x speechless as always:/ rabyy ya7f'6ch ou ikhaleech lena;* much love and respect;* -shay mait

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  5. noooooo please let sa3ad amd manal be together there so cute;* w hathy il nisra leena bathba7ha it8ith malat kaf:) bas as always amazing!!!!!!!!!!

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  6. Its my first time to comment on any blog but I'll comment now and say you are such an exquisite write. I really love the way you write. Keep going with the amazing work.

    Loads of love :*

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  7. okay.. so yea i'm a silent reader but i like being silent , but just because i love you so much and your blogggg!! i will tell you how amazing you are and how your stories and advices helped me a lot !!!! THANKYOU SO MUUUCHHH!!!! please please please DO NOT STOP.



    :)

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  8. Fabulous !! Amazing!! Stunning !!! Wooooowwwww!!! You're a legend!! You'll be known as "the talented writer"!! No, ana mo sa7ra ;p Wallah enik tjaneneen, such an amazing writer .. I LOVE YOU SAMOOORA!!! -R*

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  9. please start posting everyday or atleast every other day! please! we cant wait any longer! ga3da astana 3ala naaaaaaaar

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  10. Awesome post!! <3

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  11. i really love you so much. your blog is indescribable and addicting<3! i simply adore you and the way you write. this is the first comment i write because i just dont know what to say, you wow us every time you post! please please post soon!!! why cliffhangers whyy :"""(????!! i personally appreciate the "my own area". very creative and charming. keep up the awesome job beautiful<3. hope i made your day x
    -H

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  12. You said youll be spamming us with posts and you didnt

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  13. when are going to post ?! please say TODAY:'(

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  14. Postttt pleaseeee :((

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  15. Make it a happy ending ��and I rellllllly liked it hope you post soon ❤��������

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  16. ya5y please post!

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  17. Thats it i'll stop reading your blog

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  18. If your planning on not posting tell us please!!

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  19. PPPPPPPOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!! I'm so addicted plzzz POST!!!

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  20. I hate to be the one who'd burst your bubble sweetie, but half of the stuff you post in your own area aren't even yours, for example the arabic poetry; & I'm not saying this as a motive of hatred, I'm an old reader of yours, & I truly like your way of writing, but to post others work and claiming it's yours: now that's unacceptable! It's also considered as plagiarism! I've searched lots of your posts, & they turn out to be from google, I'm talking about your own area, so please as a writer, you know how it feels to have your work being stolen, & how it would frustrate you: therefore, I think you should at least say that they're not yours, and aren't related or affiliated to you in any way. You don't even mention they aren't yours, I think you should, or don't act like they're yours since they aren't, & this isn't where I'm accusing you of plagiarism, I'm not accusing you, I wouldn't comment if I didn't search those various poems of yours & found 'em in other website. I think there's something called COPYRIGHTS.
    An adviser.

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    1. oh my gooossh! you are 100% right!!
      dawart eb google shi3ir ehya katbita w ligaita !
      Im VERYYYY disappointed! seriously ya3ny u used to post alot w the chapyers were amazing im not saying ena now they arent amazing bs u used to right long chapters and alot of flashbacks ! al7een matnazleen wayid w 7ail g9ar china bs tabeen etsakteena! la w entay tgoleen ena u were fasting and u were tired w chithy. shloun 3indich wakt u write many tweets ya3ni bil youm el wa7id taktibeen wayid ya3ny u have time w enery to do that bs ma3indich to write atleast 1 chapter? maga3da agol u have to w chithy bs latigoleen i will post w u dont t3algeena chithy w ta7gireena laman engolich post w please w madry shno, may9eer walla! 7isay feeny. btw im not saying i hate u or anything like yhat bs im saying the truth cus may9eer bs enjamil walla ! ga3da takhsireen wayid readers mn hal shay w u will loose a lot more etha tamaitay chithy! im reallllyy sad and disapointed about the fact that my FAVOURITE blogger maga3da tihtamlina . Im sorry etha za3altay, i love u bs thats the truth..
      Ps. ik ena everyone has personal things w ena u cant post everything day bs atleast tell us u cant ya3ny 3asham mat3algeena.
      Thanks ♥☆

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    2. chapters* 7isay feena* that*everyday* 3ashan*

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    3. bil '3ala6 kitabt right instead of write wayid badliyat sorry lana kitabt bsir3a

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