Hey guys,
THE NEW STORY HAS BEGAN!!!:D
THE NEW STORY HAS BEGAN!!!:D
IT’S CALLED
COLORFUL LOVE AS YOU CAN SEE, Hahaha ;p
I really hope you
enjoy this new story, I have been hours thinking about
what to write. I would really appreciate it if i get your comments/feedbacks.
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This story is based on imagination, so 100% FICTION!!!
This story is based on imagination, so 100% FICTION!!!
Main character:
Manal: Long wavy
cinnamon hair, brown eyes, rosy cheeks, ruby red lips, long skinny eyelashes,
thin, normal height, tanned skin color.
It was the night of
my graduation. I was really nervous, my heart kept beating faster by the second
and the atmosphere around me was getting tenser.
I was shaking, as
usual, I normally shake. I have this problem with my hand, but tonight I was
shaking even more.
At last, today is
MY day. The day I have been
waiting for, for 12 years.
I couldn't sleep
all night, I was so nervous.
I feel so happy, it
feels good to finally graduate, I feel proud of myself.
This day has come at last.
This day has come at last.
You know that good feeling that comes upon you when you
do something good, how you feel proud of
yourself and how you smile from ear to ear.
Confidence is being
satisfied of who and what you are, risk a change, overcome the fear and win.
Everyone is special in their own way, don't ever let anyone let you feel down.
Be confident, act confident, feel confident, and you will get what you worked
hard for. Successful people do what unsuccessful people don't dare. Shoot your
goals high and go jump and reach for them, always remember YOU CAN AND YOU
WILL, YOU CAN AND YOU WILL, YOU CAN MANAL AND YOU WILL!!! Follow your dream,
and always remember, nothing is impossible, everything is possible...
I know i'm crazy,
talking to myself, but who doesn't, eh?!:D
I was interrupted
by a voice..
........:
"Manal Al X......"
I heard someone
call my name, I looked up to find
the head standing, It was time to get
my graduation certificate.
I got up and walked
towards the head.
I could hear the
sound of my heels stabbing the floor. I could even hear
some people calling out my name, cheering. My hands still
shaking and my heart beating faster. I had a big smile
plastered on my face.
I stretched my hand
out and shook hands with her, while taking my certificate with my other hand. I
then walked back to my seat confidently.
The time went
by....
Suddenly I heard
someone scream out....
.........: "Congratulations
Class of 2012!!!"
I held my
graduation hat and threw it high up in the air. I was so happy, I
had the biggest grin on my face, I felt good. Everyone did the
same, everyone threw their hats in the air.
Just imagine that
moment, imagine all the hats in the air, laughs and smiles shooting from
everywhere, people clapping and people cheering.
What a lovely
feeling.
It was the night of
my life....
.......:
"MANAL!!!"
I turned around to
find my family standing....
Mum: "Mabrook
7abebtyy," She hugged me.
Dad: "Mabrook
ya binti," He grinned.
Bader:
"Mabrook Manool,"
Manal: "Allah
ybarik feekom,"
I hugged them all
Bader: "Wallah
w ti5arajtay yal ji3da," He almost screamed it out.
Manal: "Badoor
ussshhhh, fashaltni, ana kibart ma y9eer itgooli ji3da,"
Bader: "Kafii,
ana kafii, agool ily abii,"
Manal:
"Ufffff, lat 5aleena afashlik el7een," I crossed my arms around my chest.
Bader: "3adi
yallah, shno betgoolen ya3ne?!" He chuckled.
I was still
shaking...
Bader: "Manal
eedich bas eedich,"
Manal:
"Shfeeha eedii?" I glared at him.
Bader: "Rif3ay
eedich shawy,"
Manal: "Kaa
shfeeha," I lifted my hand up, it was shaking non-stop.
Bader:
"Shoofeha shlon tarjif, yal 3oya, kaaaaakkk," He laughed.
Manal:
"Et3ayeb 3alay ha? Ana a3almik mashee,"
Bader:
"Ma5af minich,"
Dad: "Yallah
3ad, baskom ehwash,"
Manal: “Yoba!” I
pouted innocently.
Dad: “Shfeech?!"
Manal: “Rakan ma r7
yeyee?!” I asked.
Dad: “Huh? La2 7abebtyy, ma r7 yeyii, akeed bil dewaniya aw 3ind shi’3il,” He averted his eyes away.
Mum: “Shi’3il? Shno
hal shi’3il ily ma yitajal? Ma gidar yeye youm ti5arij i5ta?” She spat her words out in disgust.
Dad: “Haya siktay,
mo wagta hal kalam,” He whispered to my mum, I over heard them.
Mum: “Inzain 5ala9
baskit, bs hatha el 9ij ba3ad,"
Bader: “Eeh
Manool shrayich bachr enroo7 el mazra3a?" Bader tried changing the subject to cheer my up.
Manal: “9ij?!
Etwadeeni??!!”
Bader: “Eeh, laish
la, mo tabeen etshoofen hatha, Spit, Ship, Shish, madre shisma 5aylich," *5ayl = Horse*
Manal: "Heyyyy,
esma Spirit, o eehh abyy ashoofa min zimaan ma re7t, min kither il derasa
ma gidart aroo7, eehh eehh please,"
Bader: "5ala9
bacher ana awadeech, bs r7 ykoon fee a big list in front of your door tomorrow
of what I want you to do for me, you have to earn it, mo hatha ily entay kila
etgoolena!" He stated mockingly.
Manal: "Tara may tha7ik!" I shot him a death stare.
Dad: "Bs
9ada3taw rasii,"
Mum: "Eeh wallah, 9ar 3indi 9odaa3, yallah emshaw ebser3a, nabi enrid el bait 3ashan il 7afla,"
Manal: "Eeh yallah yoba yallah,"
Mum: "Eeh wallah, 9ar 3indi 9odaa3, yallah emshaw ebser3a, nabi enrid el bait 3ashan il 7afla,"
Manal: "Eeh yallah yoba yallah,"
I was the
only girl and I was the youngest, I had two elder brothers, Rakan and Bader.
Bader is
my older brother, he is older than me in 4 years. Bader and I spent most of our
time together, we always tease each other and make fun of each other. But I
love him, he is so kind and sweet and he always has a way to make me smile and
laugh.
Rakan is
my eldest brother, but I barely see him. He is out 24/7 and we barely talk. He
is kind of weird and he has a bad temper. He yells a lot and is always not in
the mood, when I see him he just stares at me and walks away. I feel bad that
my eldest brother that should protect me is never around. All my childhood
memories that were with him were awful. When we were young, if I didn't do what
he wanted he would hit and scream and break and yell. He once trapped me in the
freezer when I was 3 years old cause I refused to do what he wanted. I would
always run to Bader since he would protect me from Rakan. I remember how Bader
used to fight for me and take care of me when I was young, he used to always
buy me sweets and chocolates and whatever I asked for. My mum and dad were busy
with their own problems, I never knew what the problems were because I was too
young to know. Whenever I saw Rakan I would get a pitch of fear in me, he would
scare me, I never really loved him. Thank god we grew up and I got rid of my
miserable childhood with him, all my childhood memories with Rakan were scary
but my childhood memories with Bader would make me smile, and sometimes laugh.
I remember how we would go to the shaleh and have a water balloon fight, it was really fun, he used to steal my balloons, and when the
balloons finished we would be too lazy to go buy more so instead we use buckets.
But I never remember playing with Rakan, Bader and I were crazy
together, we would do the most adventurous things and then get into trouble.
But I always put the blame on Bader when my mum asked and Bader would
always take the blame not involving me. He was
my buddy guard, my best friend, and my best brother.
Flashback...
We were
at the shaleh and I was filling up my plastic bag with fireworks. I was
actually stealing Bader's fireworks, I was a very naughty child when I was
young, I loved doing adventures, it was my hobby.
I held
the plastic bag that was filled with fireworks and ran to the kitchen. I was
looking for matches, I wanted to light these fireworks.
I spotted
the matches over the microwave, but I was too short and there was no way I was
going to reach them without help.
Manal:
"Ufffff now how am I ganna get those matches?" I complained in my
childish voice.
I looked
around the kitchen trying to think of a solution.
I spotted
a chair near the door, 'LIGHT BULB MOMENT', I got an idea..
Manal:
"You're a very clever child for these things you know Manal," I
laughed evilly to myself in my childish voice.
I tried
to push the wooden chair while holding the plastic bag, but the chair was too
heavily. I put all my strength in it and pushed, laying my body against the wooden
chair. My foot causing friction on the floor as I pushed using all my strength. Some of the fireworks fell to the floor as I
pushed, but I ignored them and continued to push the chair.
Manal:
"Yallah Manal, push push!!" I talked to myself in my childish voice.
There was
no use.
Manal:
"Agghhhhhhh, why am I not strong, this isn't fair," I complained in
my childish tone as I stamped my foot against the concrete floor. My shoes
suddenly beamed out red lights.
Suddnely
someone called out my name.
........:
"MANAL!!" His voice was familiar.
I was
startled, I turned
around to find Bader. As soon as my eyes laid on his I hide the plastic bag behind my back.
Bader
looked at the ground to find a couple of fireworks.
Bader:
"Shno hatha?!" He pointed to the fireworks that were under me.
I looked
at the ground and kicked the firework pieces trying to hide them.
Bader:
"You have been in my stuff, haven't you?!" He tried to sound angry
but he wasn't, his childish voice washed his anger.
Manal:
"Huh? U-umm la2," I mumbled the words out, while blinking unstoppably.
Bader:
"You could of told me you know," He gave me a toothy smile.
Manal:
"Told you what?!" I mumbled innocently as I continued to blink.
Bader:
"You're up for an adventure, aren't you?! Naughty you, don't play stupid
with me Manal, a3arfich tara," He tried to wink but it was a fail, Bader
never knew how to wink and he still doesn't.
Manal:
"Ughhhhh, how do you always catch me??! This isn't fair!!" I
complained in my childish voice.
Bader:
"Hahaha, I know you to well. It shows when you lie, you blink too fast, you could of invited me you know, and you should ask before
stealing my stuff miss 'I know everything' !!"
Manal:
"I'm sorry Bader!" I looked at the ground and tears streamed down.
Bader:
"Stop crying you cry baby and move, let me move that chair, you can barely
move a tissue box," He teased me.
Manal:
"Who said? I can move the chair alone!" I tried to sound strong and
serious with my childish tone.
Bader:
"So should I go?!" He threatened.
Manal:
"No, no!!" I yelled out the words in a rush.
Bader:
"Hahaha, okay, now move!" He ordered.
I moved
away so Bader could move the chair, and he did. He was stronger than me, I
admit it.
Bader:
"E7MMM E7MMM!!" He glared at me with a toothy smile.
Manal:
"Fine, you did it, now stop showing off and move it, we don't wanna get
caught,"
Bader:
"Okay, stop ordering me miss 'I know everything'!"
Manal:
"And you stop calling me that mr. 'show off'!!"
Back to
the present...
We rode
the car and went home, we were having a party.
The whole
family and my friends were invited.
When we
arrived home I ran up to my room and changed my clothes.
I wore a
tight peach dress that showed off my curves perfectly along with white truffle
heels.
I then
applied simple makeup, I didn't like to over do it.
I then
left my wavy long hair down and got my accessories sorted.
I was
ready...
I opened
the room door and walked down stairs, I saw Bader standing.
Manal:
"7elo Bader??"I asked.
Bader:
"La 5ayis," He chuckled.
Manal:
"Chub," I crossed my arms.
Bader:
"At'3ashmar ma3ach shfeech? Wallah gumar, gumar!!!"
Manal:
"Adre ieny 7elwa,"
Bader:
"6a3 hathy wayd em9adga ro7ha,"
Manal:
"Eeehh," I giggled. "Inzain ta3al Bader, wain il nas?
Laish mako a7ad?!"
Bader:
"Shfeech Manool taw il nas, 6el3ay bara ro7ay shoofay itha i3jibich
il design,"
Manal:
"Inzain inzain,"
Bader:
"Eee kint bagolich,"
Manal:
"Shno!"
Bader:
"Tara 3azem refeeji, okay?!"
Manal:
"Eee okay, 3adyy," I smiled.
I then went
outside and looked around.
The
design was perfect.
"CONGRATULATIONS
MANAL!!"
I smiled
while looking at the big letters hanged up.
I then
looked at the food.
It was
all what I ordered.
Perfect...
I then
stopped near the tables.
There was
something wrong.
I looked
around the table.
The
flowers....
I ordered
pink flowers, they got me red flowers -.-
I was
very picky, I liked everything to go as I wanted it to.
I then
turned around to look for the manager.
I walked
around the place, there was no one.
"I
ordered pink, not red, Uffffff.." I
complained to myself.
I kept
walking around the place looking for someone, anyone....
"Wainhom?? Abii pink, uff!" I continued to complain to
myself.
I then
spotted a guy standing outiside, he had his back towards me. I quickly walked
toward him.
Manal:
"Emmmm law sima7t...."
He turned
around, he was
wearing a black buttoned shirt along with black pants, a suit.
He looked
as if he worked here.
I didn't
really look at him clearly, I didn't
really care how he looked like.
I just
wanted my flowers changed.
......:
"Hala i5tii?!"
Manal:
"U-umm el ward, ana 6alba loon il wardi bs yabo il loon il a7mar,
laish?!" I asked.
......:
"7athr i5tii, min 3youni, aroo7 il7een w ashtrilich worood wardiya
wala yhmich,"
Manal:
"Bs laish ma yibtoohom?! Ya3ni il7een shasawi?! Ma r7
yamdii,"
.......:
"Wallah law 3alay ayami3lich werood il denya w a76hom ib eedich bs lil
asaf ana ma ashti'3il mini," He smiled.
My face
got redder, I was speechless.
Okay,
this is embarrassing..
Manal:
"Weeeeehhh sorry, 3abali inik tishi'3il ehne, sorry wallah,"
........:
"La 3adi, bs itha tabeen ayiblich tara,"
Suddenly
I heard Bader's voice...
Bader:
"Hala Sa3ad, shlonik?? Manal? Shfeech laish wagfa
mini??"
Manal:
"La wala shay, bs yabaw loon il ward '3ala6 fa s2alta, U-umm bs 6ala3 ma yishti'3il mini,"
Bader:
"Kaaaaaakkk yal ma95ara, ana giltlik la talbis hal badla, 9ayer chinik
garsoon,"
Sa3ad:
"Ent shako, ana 3ajebni, tara mayhemnii rayik!! Ha Manal tabeeni
aroo7 ashtrilich wardii?!"
Manal:
"Ahhh la., sorry,"
I quickly
walked away.
I was so
embarrassed...
WONDERFUL!
ReplyDeleteAwww thank you, i hope you enjoy the next posts!!!:D
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ReplyDelete9IJ??? PINK FLOWERS!!! AKEED??? HAHAHAHA
DeleteI POSTED TODAY!!:D ENJOY LOVE xxxx
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